Saturday, January 14, 2012

Sheen's Essay - Edited

tq sheen for your essay that you willingly share with others so that they may avoid the same mistakes you've done. i've only edited for word class, word order and basic grammar errors (there are many unmarked) without touching on the content.. you may leave comments here about what you think of the essay. alternatively.. you may submit your essay to me (although i don't guarantee that i can mark/edit each and every one that i receive)... so what do you think of this essay?

http://www.scribd.com/doc/78240213/Sheen-s-Essay
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8 comments:

  1. 乐轩January 15, 2012 at 8:00 AM

    Ms Audrey, u cn help me to mark the essay if i sent to you ?? Vivienne =)

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  2. AnonymousJanuary 16, 2012 at 1:52 PM

    Ms Audrey,

    May I know what is the entrance band needed to enter a local university if I wanted to do courses like medic,engineering,pharmacy,law or others professional courses?

    Thanks,
    John Bill

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  3. nemolovesjjJanuary 18, 2012 at 10:20 AM

    Mr/Mrs Anon Jan 16, 2012 01:52 PM

    As far as I'm concern, usually for medic, pharmacy and law students, they have to achieved Band 4 and higher. Not sure of other courses.

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  4. E.M.I.L.YJanuary 30, 2012 at 7:47 PM

    hi.teacher.i need ur help.i got band 2 in MUET.how sad i'm.i wan to improve it,at least get band 3 in next exam.my writing is very weak.especially question 1.i don't know how to answer it.can teacher teach my some techniques? n some techniques for other papers.

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  5. AnonymousFebruary 3, 2012 at 3:51 AM

    Hi,teacher=) Any band 4-5 essay for this title? This title is quite difficult for me =)

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  6. yanxinFebruary 15, 2012 at 2:33 AM

    hi teacher~
    im retaking muet in the coming march since i only got band 4 with 210marks in the last November. I seriously didn't perform well during the last examination as the writing is exactly the 2nd last day of my semester break holiday, played too much and didn't study at all in that holiday.T.T I want to get a band 5 very badly and I wish that teacher could post more good essays as essay is my weakest part. thanks a lot!!

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  7. AnonymousFebruary 13, 2013 at 6:47 PM

    As far as i,m concerned for writing task b, in para 1 u need to make a stand agree, disagree and partial. It can b implied. U also need a good thesis statement. Many candidates fail to do so.

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